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11 Second Club tempfinal by jameson9101322 11 Second Club tempfinal by jameson9101322
Video here: [link]

That's just a link to my videos. its got the newest one (in color) and its previous versions on there too. Please everyone, I'm hoping this is the last one... so any and all last minute critiques would be VERY MUCH APPRECIATED!!!

Thanks much!

toonboom
quote from "the Fisher King" - Jeff Bridges.
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:icontrulyquixotical:
Ooh, very fluid movement.
Did you do this Frame by frame, or was there a lot of tweening?
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jameson9101322 Nov 4, 2007  Professional General Artist
A little of both. I straight aheaded through the action in rough, then went back and cleaned and padded how I could.
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:iconzen-apprentice:
I think that the animation is much smoother, and that the overly embellished gestures from the previous temps are softened so that while the gestures are there they don't really distract.

It's very nice and I like it very much.
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:iconlxldumbasslxl:
Smooth movement, expressive and the lip movement fits the speech. =3 Very good, Mi'lady.
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:iconcaptainquirk:
It's really shaping up!
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HorseCookies Oct 27, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
oh poor guy D:
it looks much better colored, it looks more clean. i think that to improve yourself all you need is practice:D
good luck!^^
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Vampirika Oct 27, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great. I wish I could do that.
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:iconlightningwolfstrike:
His hand and arm movement is too frequent. The moment does not seem to match up with what he is saying ex: at the end his hand move suddenly down on the word change which was not emphasized much.

I cant really think of anything else, are you being marked big on this?
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jameson9101322 Oct 27, 2007  Professional General Artist
Its not for class, its for that website I linked to in the description
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